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Walking  down  the  street  we  meet  many  people.With  those  happy  ones  who  call  our name  loud  we like  to  talk.Meanwhile,alongside  walk  the  quiet  lonely ones,the  mute  martyrs.More  noiseless  than quiet,more  apperances  than  creatures,more  shadows  than people.Our  eyes  do  not  see  them,our  eyes  blind  for  their  saddnes,our  ears  do  not  hear  them,our  ears  deaf  for their cry,our  heart  do  not  notice  them,our  heart  guilty  for  their  sorrow.They  live like   a  lonesomely  briar  but  with  thorns  turned  inside  not  to  scratch anyone,not  to  prick  anyone,just  their  own  heart  and  themselfs.And  they  live  that  way,so  quiet,so  unhappy,they  pass  off  like  shadows,like  minutes  and  hours,and  as soon  as  they  die,broken  and  sapless the  obituaries  declare  that  they  shared  this  world  with  us.
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Inspired by Ivan Leso Ivanović's same tittled poem
It's shame it isn't translated in english=(!
here's on of my pics who is some kind relited to this theme[link]
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I hope this doesn't come off the wrong way, but I have one very insignificant critique: there is a space after commas and periods. It really doesn't matter, and the piece is beautiful, but it's just a little something that will allow some of us grammar crazies focus on your writing more :)
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~LilithHatchersoon Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course,I will=)
I usually do,but I haven't spend ages on computer so I accustomed to writting in Cursive=)
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Mood: Love =realARTIZT Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing use of metaphorical speaking! :D Not sure how different this is from the original, but this is an amazing translation whether it's accurate or not- it's beautiful and sad and great :) Thank you for submitting this to #SayItHere!
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~LilithHatchersoon Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The original one is more a song=)
Tthank you so much:la:
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:iconmetorus:
Thank you for this translation :rose:
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~LilithHatchersoon Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I added a bit of mine too=D
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:iconmetorus:
Mhh, it sounds like you :aww:
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~LilithHatchersoon Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=D
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:iconmetorus:
Ich find's ganz wunderschön :sun:
Macht mich sehr nachdenklich.
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~LilithHatchersoon Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Das wahr auch der Grund wieso Ich es geschrieben habe
Fiele Leute haben Mitgeful fur diese Menschen,aber oft merken sie gar nicht wie sie sich wurchlich verhalten
(meine Vremndsprache Tastatur ist auser betrieb)
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